Strange Someone
Page 1
Panel 1 � Delila sitting on the edge of the break room cough as Steven comes into the room.
Delila: eh-HEH eh-HEH
Steven: Delila, what�s wrong?
Panel 2 � Steven sitting next to Delila as she looks up at him.
Delila: Oh *sniff* Steven, I didn�t hear you come in.
Panel 3 � Steven putting his hand on Dalila shoulder.
Steve: What�s wrong, my darling?
Panel 4 � Delila looking away looking as vulnerable as possible. But the panel is ripped through by a giant x.
Panel 5 � A yellow legal pad with writing on it that Liz�s hand is crossing out.
Liz (thought): Ugh! This is such crap!
Text on the pad: Steven look deeps eyes looked longingly into Dalila�s tear filled ones. Gentlely he places a comforting hand on her should and querying �What�s wrong my darling?� The nurse chokes another wave of sobs unable to gaze upon her lover�s chiseled fa (fixed: Steven�s deep eyes looked longingly into Delila�s tear-filled ones. Gently, he places a comforting hand on her shoulder, querying, �What�s wrong my darling?� The nurse chokes another wave of sobs, unable to gaze upon her� etc. Wasn�t sure if the typos here were intentional.)
Page 2
Panel 1 � Liz chewing on the end of her ballpoint pen while examining her legal pad.
Panel 2 � Liz hunched over her legal pad writing something down. She sits Indian style in tiny couch with a small table in front her. On the table is a large purse and cup of coffee.
Jeff (off panel); Excuse me, but-
Panel 3 � Over Jeff�s shoulder as looking down at Liz (since he�s standing). Liz waves dismissively at in the air at him without looking up.
Liz: I already told you not to bug me / and if my coffee cup�s empty, just
Panel 4 � Pull out to show the whole coffee shop. Liz looks and has a surprised look on her face as Jeff stands in front of her with a soda and an unopened bag of chips.
Liz: Fill�/it�/ and you are not the server.
Jeff: Nope.
Page 3
Panel 1 � Liz biting her bottom lip looking down.
Liz: Sorry.
Panel 2 � Jeff looking around the coffee shop.
Jeff: It�s alright. I�m supposed to meet a writer here, and uh �
Panel 3 � Liz partially getting up eagerly raising one hand. Jeff places down his soda and chips.
Liz: Oh! Are you from St. Jude�s Hospital?!
Jeff; Yeah.
Panel 4 � Jeff shaking her hand as he pulls an empty chair over from a near by table.
Jeff: Jeff Stewart.
Liz: I�m Liz Eder.
Panel 5 � Liz with an impressed look gesturing with one hand toward Jeff as he opens is soda can.
Liz: You aren�t really what I was expecting all.
Jeff: Oh. Why not?
Panel 6 � Over Liz�s shoulder so Jeff�s face can be seen clearly. Liz continuing to talk while Jeff drinks his soda and furrows his eyebrows.
Liz: I thought they�d send over a nurse or someone less important than a doctor.
Page 4
Panel 1 � Jeff putting down his soda.
Jeff: I�m actually a nurse,/ not a doctor.
Panel 2 � Liz biting her lower lip again.
Liz: Oh, sorry. / Can you do me a favor and forget I said that last part?
Panel 3 � Jeff opening his bag of chips.
Jeff: Yeah, sure.
Panel 4 � Liz looking at her legal pad and as Jeff eats some chips.
Jeff: So you�re writing a book that takes place in a hospital?
Liz: Uh, yes. It�s about nurse and a single father who fall in love while she is helping treat his son.
Panel 5 �Jeff looking down at his chip disappointed as he chews them.
Liz: Currently, I�ve gotten myself a bit of writer�s block.
Page 5
Panel 1 � Jeff holding the opening of the bag to his nose.
Liz: I thought maybe learning more about hospitals�
Panel 2 � Liz looking at Jeff confused while he has the chip bag crunch up against his face.
Liz: Might help�/ me think of-/ What exactly are you doing?
Panel 3 � Looking from an experation date on the chip bag.
Jeff; I think my chips are stale. They don�t smell right.
Panel 4 � Liz giving him a skeptical look.
Liz: They don�t smell right?
Jeff: Yeah. But go on.
Panel 5 � Liz adjusting herself in her seat.
Liz: Oookay./ I thought learning more about hospitals might help me get inspiration.
Panel 6 � Jeff taking another sip of his soda.
Jeff: Such as�
Page 6
Panel 1 � Liz picking up her while Jeff takes a second glance at his chips.
Liz: For instance, where does a nurse�s authority end and the doctor�s begin when dealing with a patient?
Panel 2 � Jeff thinking for a moment.
Jeff: Well, that depends on the patient, why they are there, and the nurse.
Panel 3 � Jeff gesturing toward her and Liz writes down notes.
Jeff: Like, a nurse practitioner has much more responsibility than, say, a vocational nurse.
Panel 4 � Liz writing on her legal pad.
Liz: Uh huh, now I�m going to stop you for a moment before I forget.
Panel 5 � Liz looking up at Jeff.
Liz: I want to know when you are free again to cover any other questions I have.
Jeff: Hmm.
Page 7
Panel 1 - Jeff scratches the back of his head and looks toward the door of the coffee.
Jeff: I got a morning shift tomorrow, so I can meet you here after.
Panel 2 � Jeff pointing to a table near the door.
Jeff: But could we sit over there tomorrow?
Liz: Okay. Any reason why?
Panel 3 � Jeff giving a weak smile.
Jeff: This table is kinda close to the restroom and the smell is bugging (�bugging me?�).
Panel 4 � Liz raising an eyebrow as Jeff shrugs.
Liz: You can smell the restroom from here?
Jeff: I have a sensitive nose.
Panel 5 � Liz looking down at her legal pad again.
Liz: Riiight. / So what are the different kinds of nurses and what can they all do?
Jeff (off panel) Well, there are nurse practitioners, registered nurses, and
Page 8
Panel 1 � Liz sitting in her living room staring at her laptop.
Liz: *sigh*
Panel 2 � Liz watching as Sarah pushes the front door open with one foot. Sarah flips through an opening file with a briefcase tucked under her arm and she uses her opposite to keep a cell phone close enough to her mouth to speak into it.
Sarah: Yes John. I have the report right in front of me. / How many damn times do I have to tell you this shit doesn�t cut it?
Panel 3 � Sarah slamming the door with her foot gritting her.
Sarah: No! NO! NO! NO!/ WE�RE COMPLETELY SCREWED, YOU DUMBASS!/ Why? Why would you do that!?
SFX: ThUD!
Panel 4 � Liz lazily watching on the couch.
Sarah (off panel): You asshole, I swear to god I will gut you like a fish and staple your insides to my wall if you mess this up!
Panel 5 - Sarah dropping all her stuff on the ground looking exhausted.
Sarah: Argh!
Page 9
Panel 1 � Liz seat on the couch as Sarah organizes everything she dropped.
Liz: How was work?
Sarah: Same old, same old.
Panel 2 � Sarah placing putting her cell phone in her pocket while holding her papers and briefcase in the other hand.
Liz: I think you should invest in BlueTooth.
Sarah: Probably. / So how�s the book coming?
Panel 3 � Liz looking down at her computer.
Liz: *sigh* Badly. / I had one idea but that didn�t go anywhere.
Panel 4 � Sarah placing her briefcase and papers on a shelf near the front door while Liz runs her fingers through her hair.
Liz: I�d scrap this whole thing, except my contract says I need to write another book for them.
Sarah: That�s too bad.
Panel 5 � Sarah taking off her coat.
Sarah: So I�m guessing the nurse didn�t tell you anything helpful.
Page 10
Panel 1 � Liz placing her laptop beside her on the couch.
Liz: Actually, I got some interesting information from him. / I just haven�t thought of what to do with it yet.
Panel 2 � Inside of the coffee shop with Jeff and Liz seated near the door.
Caption: Hopefully, after tomorrow that will change.
Jeff: Usually nurses are supposed to get the doctor then.
Panel 3 � Liz writing down notes on her legal pad.
Liz: Uh huh. / And can you think of anything else that might be helpful to me?
Panel 4 � Jeff shaking his head.
Jeff: Not unless if for something specific.
Page 11
Panel 1 � Jeff gesturing toward Liz as she sips her coffee.
Jeff: Though maybe you should give me your number, in case you have any questions.
Panel 2 � Liz putting down her coffee cup .
Liz: Wouldn�t me having your number be more useful if I have questions?
Panel 3 � jeff nervously scratching the back of his head.
Jeff: Heh. True, but do you think I could get your phone number anyway?
Panel 4 � Liz looking at Jeff unimpressed as he gives her a big grin
Panel 5 � same shot as last panel only jeff is gesturing toward her.
Jeff: Or maybe I could buy you lunch?
Liz: We just ate.
Page 12
Panel 1 � Liz rolling her eyes.
Jeff (off panel): Tomorrow then!?
Liz: Fine.
Panel 2 � Jeff eagerly replying.
Jeff: Great! / Can you meet me at the hospital at 11?
Panel 3 - Liz waiting near the nurses station in a hospital looking at her watch.
Caption: Then we can head out right after my shift.
Panel 4 � Over Liz�s shoulder show Jeff (he�s already changed out of his scrubs) walking toward Liz and waving to another nurse.
Jeff: Joan, thanks again for covering my shift so I could go on that hunting trip.
Joan: Just remember you get my Saturday shift.
Jeff: I won�t.
Page 13
Panel 1 � Jeff stopping in from of Liz
Jeff: Ready to go?
Liz: Yeah, sure.
Panel 2 � Jeff and Liz walking out of the hospital.
Jeff: So is there any place in particular you want to go?
Liz: Have you ever been to The Purple Elephant?
Panel 3 � Jeff adjusting the backpack strap looking uneasy.
Jeff: Yes, and I can�t go back.
Panel 4 � Liz mockingly tilting her head to him.
Liz: Why, does the smell bother you?
Jeff: No.
Panel 5 � Jeff hunching over a little.
Jeff: I�m just not allowed in for abusing their all you can eat buffet
Panel 6 � Liz looking at him confused.
Liz: What�s that supposed to mean?
Page 14
Panel 1 � Jeff�s hand cutting up a rare steak with 2 empty plates that still has some steak sauce on them off to the side.
Panel 2 � Liz watching Jeff eat while picking up a few vegetables with her fork. Pull out to show them in an applebee�s style restaurant.
Panel 3 � Liz looking at him in disgust.
Liz: You know that is really bad for you right?
Panel 4 �Jeff shrugs.
Jeff: I�m a nurse. Of course, I know.
Panel 5 � Liz talking and behind her there is a middle aged man reading a newspaper.
Liz: I think I can hear your arteries clogging.
Page 15
Panel 1 � Jeff, with a mouth follow of food, leaning to one side to look past Liz.
Liz: You always eat like this?
Panel 2 � Part of Liz�s face but more focus on the man with a newpaper.
Liz: Or have you not eaten for a week?
Panel 3 � Jeff leaning so much to the side that he is about to fall out of his chair.
Liz: Jeff!
Panel 4 � Jeff�s face as he turns his attention back to Liz
Page 16
Panel 1, 2, 3 (break up the action however you want.) � Jeff and his chair falling over but Jeff does a small flip so he can land unharmed.
Panel 4 � Liz sitting at the table looking at Jeff in completely surprise as Jeff brushes himself off.
Panel 5 � Jeff picking up his chair.
Jeff: Sorry.
Page 17
Panel 1 � Liz trying to hide that she is impressed and Jeff walks past her.
Jeff: I�ll be back in a sec.
Panel 2 � Liz turning in her seat to see Jeff talking to the man with the newpaper.
Jeff: Do you mind if I borrow your newspaper for a moment?
Panel 3 � The man handing the newspaper to Jeff.
Jeff: I promise to give it back.
Man: Here. I�m finished anyway.
Panel 4 � Liz turned to Jeff as he walks back reading the front page of the paper.
Liz: What was that about?
Jeff: Um�
Panel 5 � Close up of the headline on the newspaper.
Jeff: I just needed to take a look at one of the articles.
Headline: Mauling Victim Found in Alley
Page 18
Panel 1 � Same shot as panel 5 last only with different lighting so show this paper is outside on a nice day.
Panel 2 � Connor reading the front of the newspaper while shoving a whole hotdog into his mouth with one hand. Next to him is a greasy hotdog vendor preparing another hotdog. Jordan is next to Connor looking at his watch.
Panel 3 � Hotdog guy handing Connor (now with some mustard on the corner of his mouth) the other hotdog.
Hotdog guy: Here Detective Burke.
Panel 4 � With the new hotdog in Connor�s mouth, Connor pulling out his wallet from his back pocket with the paper tucked under one arm. Crumbs shoot out of Connor�s mouth as he talks.
Connor: How much?
Hotdog guy: $42
Panel 5 � Connor shoving the rest of the hotdog into his mouth, while handing Hotdog guy a $50. the Hand with the money in it has his index finger raised.
Connor: One more and keep the rest.
Page 19
Panel 1 � Connor about the take a bite out of the 3rd hotdog. Jordan looks up at him with an eyebrow raised.
Jordan: What, I don�t get lunch?
Panel 2 � Connor looking at Jordan.
Panel 3 � Connor looking at his hotdog pouting.
Connor: Um�you really want it?
Panel 4 � Jordan rolling his eyes as Connor grins and precedes to he his hotdog.
Jordan: *sigh* Go ahead, you bottomless pit./Those things are gross anyways.
Panel 5 � Connor talking with a mouth full of hotdog and pulling the newspaper out from under his arm. Jordan tilts his head to see the headlines.
Connor: They are cheap so I can buy a lot of them/ That�s good enough for me.
Jordan: So what about the paper has you so interested this afternoon?
Page 20
Panel 1 � Jordan and Connor walking down the busy street.
Connor: A guy was found in an alley dead, and supposedly it�s an animal attack.
Panel 2 � Connor wiping the mustard out of the corner.
Connor: However, if any wild animals had escaped from the zoo, I would have heard about it down at the station.
Panel 3 � Jordan smirking as Connor looks down at the paper.
Jordan: And what, pray tell, do the bloody geniuses you work with think happened?
Connor: Current theory is, someone�s illegal pet escaped.
Panel 4 � Connor stuffing the rest of the hotdog in his mouth.
Connor: But it happened during Jeff and I�s monthly hunting trip so�
Page 21
Panel 1 � Connor folding up the newpaper and giving Jordan a smug look.
Jordan: So it wasn�t someone�s pet.
Connor: See THAT is why I love you. / You�re so good at putting two and two together.
Panel 2 � Connor hailing a cab with the paper under his arm again. Jordan has his hands shoved in his pockets.
Jordan: Now the question is, why do I put up with you?
Connor: Easy. My good looks and charm.
Panel 3 � Connor opening the door of a cab for him and Jordan.
Jordan: Yeah. Sure. / Let�s go with that then.
As We Were
Page 1
Pane1 1 � It�s raining. Suzanne�s combat boots run through a puddle.
Panel 2 � Same shot of the puddle as Lope�s feet are careful not to step in it/
Panel 3 � Suzanne running through a poor part of a south western city (so make any background people Hispanic.
Suzanne: Will you hurry up, Lope? / We�re going to lose him!
Panel 4 � Lope embarrassed as he awkwardly hops in between several large puddles.
Lope: Most sorry, Suzanne.
Page 2
Panel 1 � Suzanne turns the corner as Lope catches up.
Suzanne: Mierda!
Panel 2 � A tiny back street which has several small alleyways leading off from it. There are lots of boxes and piles of junk everywhere but nothing living in it (except a rat or two)
Suzanne: Where�d it go?
Panel 3 � Lope thinking.
Lope: Hmm
Panel 4 � Lope�s hand almost touching her should but stopping right before actually touching her (he always asks before touching any one on purpose) as he beams confidence. Suzanne is rolling her eyes.
Lope: Do not be worrying, Suzanne. / Her holiness will give the answers.
Panel 5 � high angle shot with a silhouetted werepanther (basically a human sized panther so it�s a bit smaller than a real panther) is walking on the edge of a roof in the foreground. Below him Suzanne his gesturing toward Lope extremely frustrated.
Suzanne: For the last time, Lope, the world does not work that way!
Page 3
Panel 1 � Lope�s confidence is unfazed by Suzanne�s lecture as she rubs her temple. So tiny rocks fall on Lope�s hat.
Suzanne: Your god-
Lope: Goddess
Panel 2 � Lope glancing upward as more tiny rocks hit his hat.
Suzanne: Your Goddess isn�t going to just give you the answers because you want her to.
Panel 3 � Lope looking up and pointing with one hand as he reaches for his staff in the other. Suzanne also looks up. Silhouette of the werepanther is on the roof.
Lope: But she has.
Panel 4 � Suzanne stepping back as she pulls out her knife
Sfx: rrRRrrr <-Panther noises? Right?
Suzanne: Mierda.
Page 4
Panel 1 � The werepanther leaps down as both Suzanne and Lope jump out of the way
SFX: RaoowH
Panel 2 � Suzanne gets to her feet while struggling off her jacket.
Panel 3 � the werepanther is slashing at her while she shake twirls her jacket in front of it to keep it�s attention. In the background Lope is holding his staff horizontally with both hands and starting to cast a spell.
Suzanne: Here kitty.
Sfx: Hesssss
Lope: Deate de enixet volor egen ite
Page 5
Panel 1 � The werepanther jumps at Suzanne
SFX: RaoowwH
Panel 2 � Suzanne jumps upward while holding one sleeve of her jacket in each hand.
Panel 3 � the werepanther�s head gets caught in her jacket as Suzanne holds on to the sleeves still.
SFX: Formp
Panel 4 � the werepanther thrashes its head trying to get the jacket off
SFX: RRRrrrrr
Suzanne: Mierda!
Panel 5 � the motion flings Suzanne across the ally so she hits a bunch of trash cans but the jacket is still on the werepanther�s head and she is still holding on.
Suzanne: Ugh!
SFX: TRiiSHT CLANT
Page 6
Panel 1 � in the foreground lope�s staff is glowing white while in the background the werepanther is still flinging Suzanne around.
Suzanne: CHINGADA MADRE!
Lope: Jesshon Exinet!
Panel 2 � Lope as he holds his staff with both hands and the top is pointed to the werepanther.
Lope: Suzanne! Move now!
Panel 3 � Suzanne lets go of one sleeve and is flung through the air
Panel 4 � Suzanne hits the trash cans again. In the background a large beam of light hits the werepanther
SFX: TriishT CLANT
SFX: FOOAAAMMM
Page 7
Panel 1 � Lope steadying himself to hold the force of the blast.
Lope:EER
Panel 2 - the werepanther is slammed into a wall as the blast peals off some of its skin.
Panel 3 � Lope stops the blast with a tired look on his face.
Panel 4 � Suzanne gets up and pulls a piece of trash out of her hair. In the background Lope passes out.
Panel 5 � Suzanne pulls out a knife while she walks over the werepanther that is still twitching.
Panel 6 � Suzanne puts the knife through the werepanther�s head.
Page 8
Panel 1 � Lope is clutching his chest and breathing heavy.
Lope: *pant* *pant*
Suzanne: You done?
Panel 2 � Lope holds up one finger while giving a weak smile.
Lope: In moment.
Panel 3 � Suzanne looks over her arms which have several bruised and bloody spots.
Suzanne: Hurry up, that werepanther is already turning back.
Panel 4 � the werepanther is turning back into a human in the foreground while Lope gets to his feet and Suzanne is talking in the background.
Suzanne: I don�t want it to look like we�re killing humans.
Lope: Understand.
Page 9
Panel 1 � Lope and Suzanne walk away and a silhouetted figure with a hood on is watching them on the rooftops.
Lope: I can be healing your arm if you want.
Suzanne: After we find a place to crash for the night.
Panel 2 � The two of them walking down the street the next day and Lope is pushing an old beaten up motorcycle and eating a burrito
Lope: This is most good, Suzanne.
Suzanne: Uh huh.
Lope: Are you sure you not be wanting some?
Suzanne: Not hungry.
Panel 3 � Lope stops as Suzanne keeps walking.
Lope: Suzanne.
Suzanne: What Lope?
Panel 4 � Lope thinking as Suzanne looks back at him.
Lope: You last ate yesterday morning. / This is not good.
Panel 5 � Suzanne looking annoyed as Lope glances at his feet.
Lope: Is it because you are mad the killer around here was a werepanther and not Seth?
Page 10
Panel 1 � Suzanne with her arms crossed.
Suzanne: No, it�s because we only had enough money for with food today or a night in a motel.
Panel 2 � Suzanne starts walking again.
Suzanne: I decided I wanted sleep.
Panel 3 � Lope looks at his burrito.
Panel 4 � Lope holds it out to Suzanne who glares at him.
Lope: You can have my food then.
Suzanne: No.
Lope: Why not?
Panel 5 � Suzanne turning away as Lope examines his burrito.
Suzanne: Because you found it in a trash can.
Lope: Is that not good?
Page 11
Panel 1 � looking down at them is the hooded figure.
Suzanne: Lope is it was in the trash that means someone doesn�t want to eat it for a reason.
Lope; You humans are most odd.
Panel 2 � low angle looking up so while lope and Suzanne talk you can see hooded figure jump to the next roof.
Suzanne: Humans are odd? / You�re the one who didn�t know what glasses were for until I got you a pair.
Panel 3 � Lope pushing up his glasses while Suzanne looks up.
Lope: Put other things on their face for mating rituals, how was I to know glasses were not part of that.
Panel 4 � Lope Munching on his burrito.
Lope: But to waste food is most insa-
Panel 5 � Suzanne his her hand over Lope�s mouth.
Suzanne: Shut up, Lope. I think we�re being followed.
Page 12
Panel 1 � Suzanne pulls Lope around a corner into an alley way.
Suzanne: Come on.
Panel 2 � Lope shoves the rest of his burrito into his mouth.
Lope: They *murph* are on the roof.
Panel 3 � Suzanne turns to Lope who has his hand on the side of the building and chants a small spell.
Suzanne: You�re sure?
Lope: Yitlaer rippe.
Panel 4 � the whole side of the building shakes and the hooded figure loses his balance.
Panel 5 � Hooded figure falls down and hits the cement.
Lope: See?
Hooded figure: Ugh!
Page 13
Panel 1 � The hooded figure getting to his feet.
Panel 2 � Suzanne shoving the hooded figure into wall Lope had his hand on. She has a knife to his throat.
Suzanne: WHY ARE YOU FOLLOWING US?!
Panel 3 � The figures hood falling back a bit as he raises his hands in surrender. It�s a man about Lope�s age with bright red hair, freckles, and pale green eye and he has a paniced expression.
Hooded Figure: I no hurt you! Please move nif!
Panel 4 � Lope peeking past Suzanne who looking at hooded guy confused but still angry.
Suzanne: Nif?
Panel 5 � Lope squinting with an unsure look.
Suzanne: You mean knife?
Panel 6 � Hooded figure raising his chin as high as he can as the knife presses against his adem�s apple.
Hooded figure: Y-y-yes.
Page 14
Panel 1 � Lope questioningly looking at the man. (the next conversation for Nam and Lope I�m going to give you a font to hand write in their speech bubbles.)
Lope: Nam? Is that you?
Panel 2 � Nam looking pleadingly at Lope.
Nam: Yes, dumbass. Now get this bitch away from me!
Panel 3 � Suzanne with her knife still at Nam�s throat. Lope scratches the back of his head embrassed.
Suzanne: Lope, do you know what he just said?
Lope: Ah� Yes. Please let go.
Panel 4 � Suzanne pulling away as Nam who know that he is finally standing up right you can see he�s only slightly shorter than Lope. Lope and Nam shake his hand.
Lope: (again in alphabet I�m giving you) What are you doing here?
Panel 5 � Nam brushing himself off as
Nam: Looking for you.
Panel 6 � Suzanne glancing over as Lope puts his hand on Nam�s shoulder.
Lope: What for?
Nam: Ozar has been caught.
Page 15
Panel 1 � Suzanne boringly picks some mud out of the bottom of her boot with her knife.
Nam: We need you to be present for his execution.
Panel 2 � Lope glancing over at Suzanne who is scrapping stuff out of the bottom of her boot.
Lope: Can I take Suzanne with me?
Panel 3 � Nam furrowing his brow as he watches Suzanne from the corner of his eye.
Nam: No humans on the island.
Panel 4 � Lope hunching over a bit and pouting as Nam looks at him surprised.
Lope: I would like her to be my companion.
Panel 5 � Nam a bit disgusted looking at Suzanne who is now cleaning her knife.
Panel 6 � Nam with his arms crossed as Lope perks up with a grin.
Nam: Fine, we�ll tell people she�s a shifter.
Lope: Really?! Thank you!
Page 16
Panel 1 � Lope walking over to Suzanne who is putting her knife away.
Suzanne: Done talking?
Lope: Yes, most done.
Panel 2 � Suzanne leaning against the wall.
Suzanne: Is he your brother or something?
Panel 3 � Lope opening his mouth to speak.
Panel 4 � Lope then pouting.
Panel 5 � Lope with an unsure look on his face. Suzanne looks up at him with her hands in her pockets.
Lope: What is word for male family with same mother but different father?
Suzanne: Half brother.
Panel 6 � Lope nodding happily as Suzanne walks over to Nam with her hands in her pockets.
Lope: Yes, Nam is my half brother. / How did you know?
Suzanne: You touched him without asking.
Page 17
Panel 1 � Lope gesture to Nam as both Nam and Suzanne have an unenthusiastic look on their faces.
Lope: Suzanne, this is my half brother, Nam.
Suzanne: Hi.
Panel 2 � Nam thinking as he finds the words.
Nam: Uh� It is� uh� neece � to meet �
Panel 3 � Nam nodding with a proud look on his face.
Nam: You.
Suzanne: Yeah.
Panel 4 � Lope grinning as he talks to Suzanne.
Lope: Nam needs me to be going home for short time.
Panel 5 � Suzanne glancing up with Lope with a suspicious look.
Lope: I would like for you to come as well.
Suzanne: What about finding Seth?
Panel 6 � Lope shoving his hands in his pockets hunched over.
Lope: Well, it will not be long time.
Page 18
Panel 1 � Suzanne thinking a bit.
Suzanne: Do you think we could find someone to cast a locator spell while there?
Panel 2 � Lope nodding.
Lope: Yes, Yes. Most powerful one too!
Panel 3 � Suzanne reluctantly agrees as Lope smiles excited.
Suzanne: *sigh* fine.
Panel 4 � A port at night that is empty. Lope, Nam, and Suzanne are waiting to get on. There are only a few other people there most of them have hoods or scarves covering their faces.
Caption: But we�re going back to finding Seth as soon as we get back.
Panel 4 � Nam leaning backward as he trying to see what is going on better.
Nam(in special text): Did you tell her yet?
Lope: (in special text) Um� I�ll do it now.
Panel 5 � Lope turning to Suzanne.
Lope: Uh� Suzanne there is one this I must say before we will be getting on.
Page 19
Panel 1 � Suzanne looking up at him as Lope adjusts his glasses.
Suzanne: What?
Panel 2 � Lope uneasily glancing away.
Lope: See� humans not been in my home for a most long time�
Captain: HEY, YOU THREE!
Panel 3 � all 3 of them glance over as a skinny middle-aged hispanic man walks over. His eyes are yellow and he has brown scales on the back of his neck which may or may not be visible depending on what kid of clothes you put on him.
Captain: What are your names- / Oh, Lope.
Panel 4 � The captain smiling at Lope who is standing up straight.
Captain: How are you?
Lope: Good. Good.
Captain: And who are these two?
Panel 5 � Lope with a hand on Nam�s shoulder.
Lope: This my half brother Nam.
Panel 6 � The captain pointing to Suzanne while still talking to Lope.
Captian: And her?
Lope: Suzanne is good friend.
Page 7 � Lope glancing away uneasy as Suzanne tilts her head suspiciously in Lope and the Captain�s direction.
Captian: Is she human?
Lope: uh�/ no.
Page 20
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Sorcery 101
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Panel 1 � Danny and Pat sitting in Pat�s crappy motel room.
Danny: Right then, / So I�m going to give this fire spell one more try, Pat.
Panel 2 � Pat standing up as Danny looks over the spell book.
Pat: Go ahead, and remember to focus, Danny.
Danny: Will do.
Panel 3 � Danny starting his fire spell. Pat is walking into his room
Danny: (fire spell)
Panel 4 � fire spell exploding and catching Danny�s shirt fire.
Danny: AHHH
SFX: FAOUM
Panel 5 � Pat blasting danny with a fire extinguisher.
SFX: FSSSSHHHHH
Panel 6 � Danny dripping wet as Pat stands there holding the fire estinisher.
Panel 7 � Danny still dripping.
Danny: I�m going home.
Pat: I thought you�d say that.
Page 2 20050516
panel 1 � Danny walking up his front porch angry.
Caption: Later
Danny: Bloody stupid spell bloody backfiring.
Panel 2 � Danny�s hand opening the handle.
Danny: bloody stupid vampire,
SFX: CIK
Panel 3 � Rebecca evil face
Danny: blasting me with fire extin-
Panel 4 � Danny opening the door wide eyed.
Danny: Oh hell�
Panel 5 � Rebecca tackling Danny jumping through the air.
Rebecca: UNCLE DANNY!
Panel 6 � Brad and Ally cuddling on the couch.
SFX� THUNK ThUMap ThOnk
Brad: Sounds like Danny�s home.
Ally: That and Rebecca snuck out of bed.
Page 3 20050518
Panel 1 � Rebecca sitting on Danny stomach as King lick Danny�s face as Brad walks down the steps.
Danny: Ya know, mate, I taught my dog to not jump on people.
Panel 2 � Brad looking down at Rebecca and Danny.
Danny: You�d think you could teach your daughter to do the same.
Brad: Sorry.
Panel 3 � Rebecca biting her lip.
Brad: She was supposed to be putting on her Pjs.
Rebecca: Um�
Panel 4 � Brad crossing his arms as Rebecca runs up the stairs.
Brad: Hop to it, kiddo.
Panel 5 � Rebecca running up the stairs as king follows.
Rebecca: Come on, King.
Page 4 20050520
Panel 1 � Brad helping Danny up.
Brad: Did Rebecca�s welcome injure anything?
Danny: Just my pride.
Panel 2 � Danny and Brad walking up the steps.
Brad: And I guess from your demeanor / and the scorch marks on your shirt,
Panel 3 � Danny scratching the back of his head.
Brad: Magic lesson didn�t go so well.
Danny: *sigh* I can get the fire to show up, / but not stay under control.
Panel 4 � Brad closing the door behind him and Danny.
Brad: You�ll get it eventually.
Danny: In the mean time, I need to figure out how to fix my shirt.
Panel 5 � Ally channel surfing Danny looks surprised.
Ally: I say just throw out that old thing.
Danny: What? Why!?
Panel 6 � Ally raising an eyebrow.
Ally: It was a black shirt when you bought it.
Page 5 20050523
Panel 1 � Danny sits in the recliner as Ally fans her hand to get smoke away from her.
Danny: Hey Ally, this shirt and I have been through a lot together.
Ally: Ugh, Danny, could you do me a favor?
Panel 2 � Danny reclining and looking up at Ally as Brad sits next to her.
Ally: Please out your cigarette
Panel 3 � Danny pouting,.
Danny: Now why would you have me do a thing like that?
Panel 4 Ally glaring at him as he lies back.
Ally: Because I have lungs that work and would like to keep it that way.
Danny: My lungs work just fine.
Panel 5 Danny furrowing his brow.
Ally: Riiiight. And that�s why you can�t run 2 blocks without gasping for air.
Panel 6 � Danny putting his arms behind his head.
Danny: Well, at least I look cool while doing it.
Page 6 20050525
Panel 1 � the whole living room with Brad raising one hand.
Brad: Could you two please stop?
Danny: She started it.
Panel 2 � Ally crossing her arms as Brad sits there uneasy.
Ally: Very mature.
Brad: Here�s an idea.
Panel 3 � Brad gesturing to Ally
Brad: How about Danny and I go rent a movie and you put Rebecca to bed?
Panel 4 � the whole living room.
Brad: By the time you�re done, we�ll be back, and we can all watch a movie.
Panel 5 � Ally reluctantly agreeing.
Ally: Hmm. Alright.
Panel 6 � Brad kissing her on the cheek.
Brad: We�ll make sure to get something you like, dear.
Page 7 20050527
Panel 1 � Danny�s car pulling into the blockbuster parking lot.
Brad: Hold on, / I got to tuck in my tail.
Danny: Eh, leave it out.
Panel 2 � Brad with looking over the car to talk to Danny.
Brad: And what do we say when people start staring?
Panel 3 � Danny gesturing to Brad as he closes the car door.
Danny: You tell them you�re a werewolf, / and if they keep staring say
Panel 4 � Danny hunched over like wolverine as a passer by over hears and eye�s get wide.
Danny: You�ll eat them!
Panel 5- Passer by scrabbling into his car.
Passerby: Errh
Panel 6 � Danny watching the guy drive off while Brad tucks in his tail.
Brad: I�m tucking it in.
Page 8 20050530
Panel 1 � Danny and Brad walking into the video store.
Danny: So what are you in the mood for?
Panel 2 � Brad with his hands in his pockets looking over.
Brad: Uh, I don�t know, probably an older movie.
Panel 3 � Danny grabbing something from the lower shelf.
Danny: How about this?
Panel 4 � Brad looking at Danny�s choice.
Brad: Nah. I�d rather not get any werewolf movie.
Panel 5 � Brad look glancing over the other movies.
Brad: The werewolf always gets killed in the end.
Panel 6 � Brad looking at Danny and Ryan looking at Megan.
Brad and Ryan: How about Ghostbusters?
Page 9 20050601
Panel 1 � Brad laughing and handing the movie to Ryan as he points to Ryan�s shirt.
Brad: You two take it. / I can tell you�re a bigger fan than me.
Panel 2 � Danny glancing at Megan who is looking through the movie.
Ryan: Thanks.
Brad: So what�s your favorite part?
Panel 3 � Megan bent over and looking at Danny raising an eyebrow.
Ryan: Oh man! There is so much to choose from!
Panel 4 �Gesturing toward Ryan.
Ryan: Like when-
Danny: So uh� is he your boyfriend?
Megan: God, no.
Panel 5- Danny glancing at her chest.
Danny: So uh�
Megan: Before you finish that sentence,
Danny: Hmm?
Panel 6 � Megan raising an eyebrow.
Megan: How old do you think I am?
Page 10 20050603
Panel 1 � Danny looking Megan p and down.
Danny: Eh�22 �21
Panel 2 � Megan shoving her hand in her pockets.
Megan: I�m 16.
Danny: Oh.
Panel 3 � Danny taking his eyes off her chest.
Danny: Well, you kids enjoy the movie.
Panel 4 � Danny going back up to Brad.
Danny: So did you find a movie?
Brad: Uh yeah.
Panel 5 � Brad hold out a dvd case.
Brad: How about Army of Darkness?
Panel 6 � Danny furrowing his brow and looking Brad.
Danny: And here I thought we wanted to rent a good movie.
Ryan: WHAT!?
Page 11 20050606
Panel 1 � Megan holding back Ryan
Ryan: ARMY OF DARKNESS IS AN AMAZING MOVIE!
Megan: Calm down.
Panel 3 � Danny laughing and pointing.
Danny: Hey check it out, When Fanboys Attack.
Panel 4 � Ryan still enraged.
Ryan: I�m serious, shortie.
Panel 5 � Danny less amused.
Danny: Let him go.
Panel 6 � Brad looking uneasy as Danny gesture toward them.
Brad: Danny�
Danny: Oh come on, mate. It will be funny.
Page 12 20050608
Panel 1 � Pat opening his mini fridge.
Pat (thought bubble): Almost out of pig�s blood.
Panel 2 � Pat drinking some and showing Danny�s spell book on Pat�s coffee table.
Pat: (thought bubble): I�ll make a quick run to the butcher shop to get some more.
Panel 3 � Pat putting down the plastic cup and reaching for Danny�s spell book.
Pat (thought): Ugh, the moron left it here again.
Panel 4 � Pat putting on his coat.
Pat (thought): I�ll just give it back to him on my way back.
Panel 5 � Pat walking out the door
Pat (thought) � It�s not like he�ll need it.
Page 13 20050610
Panel 1 � Up shot of Ryan behind him megan is rolling her eyes.
Ryan: PREPARE YOURSELF, FOOL! FOR YOU FACE A MASTER OF NECROMANCY!
Panel 2 � Danny laughing and elbowing Brad.
Danny: Heh heh. You hear that, Brad! Bloody priceless.
Panel 3 � wiping a tear from his eye from laughing so hard.
Danny: hahaha�heh heh.
Panel 4 � Danny looking up with a smirk at him as he has his arms crossed.
Panel 5 � Same panel as panel 4
Danny: Oh, you�re serious.
Page 14 20050613
Panel 1 � Ryan striking dr. doomish pose. Danny looks through his jacket pockets.
Ryan: Taste my wrath! (Did you mean �Taste MY wrath?� or does he have an accent?)/ Acende mortui ab Hades�
Panel 2 � Danny pulling out his little notebook.
Ryan: Um�/ Et appine�
Panel 3 � Ryan thinking as Megan looks at her watch standing behind him.
Ryan: Appone?�/Or is it appune?
Panel 4 � Danny get flipping to the right page on his little notebook. Ryan scratches his head.
Ryan: Hold on, I know this.
Danny: Uh huh.
Panel 5 � Danny flipping the page again as Pat walks through the entrance.
Danny: Ah found it!
Panel 6 � Pat slapping Danny on the back of the head.
Danny: Deate de Eni- OUF!
SFX: TaCK
Page 15 20050615
Panel 1 � Danny rubbing the back of his head as Pat glares at him.
Danny: What the hell was that for?
Pat: What the hell do you think you�re doing?
Panel 2 � Megan turning to Ryan annoyed.
Megan: If you�re done making a fool of yourself, can we go?
Panel 3 � Ryan looks at Pat yelling at Danny.
Pat: What would make you think casting a spell in public was a good idea?!
Ryan: Uh, yes.
Panel 4 � Danny gesturing at Ryan and Megan who are leaving.
Danny: The kid was threatening me.
Panel 5 � Pat glaring.
Pat: He�s a kid and therefore stupid. So ignore him.
Page 16 20050617
Panel 1 � Danny hunched over as Pat continues to glare.
Danny: Yeah, I know Pat, but uh�/ he called me short.
Panel 2 � Pat grumbling as he rubs his temple frustrated.
Pat: That�s because you are short.
Panel 3 � Danny throwing his hands up in the air frustrated,
Danny: Dammit, Pat, why are you even here?
Panel 4 � Pat pulling Danny�s spell book out of his bag.
Pat: I�m returning this.
Panel 5 � Danny�s face lightening up.
Danny: Hey, my book.
Panel 6 � Pat glaring at Danny as he hands him the book.
Pat: You left it at my place, /AGAIN!
Page 17 20050620
Panel 1 � Danny hunched over as Brad comes back with a movie.
Danny: Sorry.
Brad: I got a movie.
Panel 2 � Brad putting a hand on Danny�s shoulder.
Brad: We should start heading back.
Panel 3 � Brad noticing Pat who is very pissed off.
Brad: Uh� Hi.
Panel 4 � Danny gesturing upward.
Danny: Pat, this is Brad. / Brad, this is Pat.
Panel 5 � Brad holding out a hand and smile.
Brad: Oh hey, nice to finally meet you.
Panel 6 � Pat looking down at Brad�s hand a bit disgusted.
Page 18 20050622
Panel 1 � Pat looking back up at him.
Pat: I don�t associate with demons.
Panel 2 � Brad still smiley but pulling his hand away.
Brad: I�m not a demon, I�m a werewolf.
Panel 3 � Pat giving Brad an EXTREMELY dirty look.
Pat: Werewolf is really just another word for wolf demon. (awkward; I�d pick either �another word for wolf demon� or �another way of saying wolf demon�)
Panel 4 � Brad scratching the back of his head and biting his bottom lip.
Brad: Oh./ Um�o-o-okay./ N-n-nice to m-meet y-y-you.
Panel 5 � Pat walking away as Brad hunches over.
Pat: Whatever. / Danny, you better be on time tomorrow.
Page 19 20050624
Panel 1 � Danny titling his head backward and rolling his eyes. Brad is still hunched over.
Brad: Yikes.
Danny: And THAT is why I never introduced you to that wanker.
Panel 2 � The two of them walking out the door.
Danny: Sorry he said that to you though, mate.
Brad: It�s okay.
Panel 3 � the two of them walking over to the car.
Brad: So is he always that mad?
Danny: Yup.
Panel 4 � Danny opening his car door.
Danny: I think it causes him pain to be happy.
Brad: Fun.
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Page 1 20050629
Panel 1 � Ally with her arms crossed as Brad pleads with her. In the background Danny is eating dinner while Rebecca climbs on the table.
Ally: I said no.
Brad: But�/But it�s Star Wars.
Panel 2 � Rebecca trying to take some of Danny�s food and he pulls it away.
Ally: Episode 3 was terrible and I�m not sitting through it for the 12th time.
Danny: No, Rebecca.
Panel 3 � Danny leaning over in his chair to keep his food away from Rebecca.
Rebecca: But I want some.
Brad: But it�s STAR WARS!
Ally: Brad, I have to go to work.
Panel 4 � Brad slumping over.
Brad: *sigh*
SFX: CRICISH THUNK CliNk
Panel 5 � Brad turning around to see Danny and his food on the floor and the chair tip over. Rebecca looks over the edge of the table.
Brad: Rebecca!
Rebecca: What?!
Page 2 20050701
Panel 1 � King eating some of the food still on the floor while Danny cleans it up.
Panel 2 � Danny waving at King to get out of the way while he wipes steak sauce off the floor.
Danny: Out of the way, boy.
Ally: Hey, Danny.
Panel 3 � Danny throwing a tiny piece of meat up for King to catch.
Danny: Yes?
Ally: Brad took the car to the movie.
Panel 4 � Danny wiping up the floor some more as King licks up some of the missed sauce.
Ally: Can I borrow yours?
Danny: Nope. Only I�m allowed to drive my car.
Panel 5 � Ally rolling her eyes.
Danny: But I�ll give you a ride on one condition.
Ally: *sigh*
Panel 6 � Danny looking up at her.
Danny: You don�t bug me about cigarettes in the house for the next two weeks.
Ally: One week.
Danny: Okay.
Page 3 20050704
Panel 1 � Danny�s car driving through New Mahtlaw.
Ally: RIGHT side of the road/ We drive on the RIGHT side of the road here, Danny.
Panel 2 � Danny driving.
Danny: Relax. I know how to drive, Ally.
Panel 3 � Danny glancing at Ally.
Danny: So I�m curious, how does a demon bar compare to the normal bar you used to run?
Panel 4 � Ally holding on to the dashboard.
Ally: It�s about the same, only demon bar fights are a bit more dangerous.
Panel 5 � Ally turning to Danny.
Ally: And if I were you, I�d watch who I hit on. / Most of the girls there bite.
Panel 6 � Danny blowing his cigarette out the window as they pull up to the bar.
Danny: What�s wrong with biting? / It�s kinky.
Page 4 20050706
Panel 1 � Danny and Ally getting out of the car.
Ally: I�m serious, Danny.
Panel 2 � them walking down a set of stairs.
Danny: And I was just kidding.
Panel 3 � Ally opening the door as Danny puffs his cigerette.
Danny: I�m well aware of what kind of
Panel 4 � Danny turning his head as a girl in a very tight skirt walks by.
Danny: girls � attend your bar.
Panel 5 � Danny staring as the girl walks by. Ally crosses her arms.
Panel 6 Ally yelling at him as he snaps out of it.
Ally: Danny, go home.
Danny: Why?
Chesley: Ally!
Page 5 20050708
Panel 1 � Chelsey walking up to Ally carrying a few drinks. Danny meanwhile start chatting it up with a vampire and demon girl.
Chesley: You�re here early!
Panel 2 � One of the girls Danny is talking to runs a finger along his arm. As Ally talks to Chelsey.
Ally: Well, Brad took our daughter to the movies.
Panel 3 � Danny sits down with the girls and puts one arm around each one. Ally heads to the bar with Chelsey.
Ally: And I�m behind on paper work, / so here I am.
Panel 4 � Chelsey placing down the drink and looking toward Danny.
Chelsey: So then who�s that guy you came in with?
Panel 5 � Danny flirting with the two demon chicks.
Ally: That�s Brad�s friend Danny. / They�ve been friends since grade school
Panel 6 � Danny getting up and holding up his index finger.
Ally: So he moved in a several months ago to help us with Rebecca.
Page 6 20050711
Panel 1 � Chelsey grinning as Danny walks up to them.
Chelsey: He�s REALLY cute.
Ally: Um � okay. I guess.
Panel 2 � Danny pulling out his wallet.
Danny: Hey there, luv.
Chelsey: H-h-hi.
Panel 3 � Danny pulling out some money.
Danny: I�ll have a beer and two martinis.
Panel 4 � Chelsey grinning like an the idiot she is.
Chelsey: O-okay.
Panel 5 � Chelsey putting to two glasses on the starting to prepare the martinis.
Panel 6 � Danny turning as he waits and sees a new guy with the ladies.
Danny: Uh crap.
Page 11 20050713
Panel 1 � Danny slumping over and saying to a confused Chelsey.
Danny: Err, scratch the 2 martinis.
Panel 2 � Danny�s head perking up.
Snake lady: Make it just one martini.
Panel 3 � Snake lady sliding on to the stool next to Danny.
Snake lady: Perhaps I can keep you company.
Panel 4 � Danny glancing downward.
Danny: Uh�
Panel 5 � Snake lady�s finger is running along his tigh.
Danny: Okay.
Page 12 20050715
Panel 1 � Chelsey carrying some drinks on a tray.
Chelsey (thought): Dammit. I screwed up bad back there.
Panel 2 � Chelsey placing some drink for a group of demons seated at a booth.
Chelsey: Here you all go.
Chelsey (thought): I should try again.
Panel 3 � Chelsey walks away as the group all switch drinks.
Chelsey (thought); Yeah I�ll do that).
Panel 4 � Snake Lady run a finger across Danny�s chin as she walks away.
Snake Lady: Perhaps we could go somewhere private.
Panel 5 � Danny excited focused on the snake lady as Chelsey walks up to him.
Chelsey: Uh� Hi again. I just-
Panel 6 � Chelsey disappointed watching Danny leave.
Chelsey: Oh.
Page 13 20050717
Panel 1 � Snake lady and Danny walking into a simple hotel room.
Snake Lady: Well, here we are.
Panel 2 � Snake lady swiveling her hips as she walks and Danny watches her ass as he takes off his jacket.
Snake Lady: Make yourself more comfortable. / I�ll be out in a moment.
Danny: Okay.
Panel 3 � Danny pulls off his shirt.
Danny: So uh� if you don�t mind me asking,
Panel 4 � Danny pulling off his pants.
Danny: What�s with the scales?
Snake Lady: I�m a snake demon.
Panel 5 � Snake lady coming out in her underwear. Danny�s mouth hangs open a bit amd he sit on the bed.
Snake Lady: That doesn�t bother you does it?
Danny: Not a bit.
Page 14 20050720
Panel 1 � Snake lady climbing on top of Danny who is on the bed.
Snake Lady: So is that a real Rolex?
Danny: Uh yeah. Why?
Panel 2 � Snake talking into Danny�s ear.
Snake lady: No reason. / Now close your eyes.
Panel 3 � Danny smirking as the snake lady pulls some handcuffs out from under the pillow.
Danny: Heh. Okay.
Panel 4 � Danny�s wirst getting handcuffed to the bed.
SFX: Click.
Danny: Uh� what are you doing?
Panel 5 _ Danny�s opening his eyes yelling at the snake lady.
Snake lady: Robbing you.
Danny: HEY!
Panel 6 � Snake Lady taking his watch.
Snake Lady: Thanks for the watch.
Page 15 20050722
Panel 1 - Danny sitting there watching the now dressed snake lady go through his wallet.
Danny: So do you so this all the time?
Snake lady: Girl�s got to make a living.
Pabel 2 � Snake lady shoving the money in her pocket and picking up Danny�s car keys.
Snake lady: Though I don�t think any I�ve hit has had such a nice car.
Panel 3 � Danny biting his lip.
Danny: Uh, I don�t know if you want it. / It has problems starting.
Panel 4 � Danny lies down in the background as the Snake lady pockets the car keys.
Snake lady: That�s okay, / I�m just going to sell it.
Danny: *sigh* Could you at least hand me my pants?
Panel 5 � snake lady stepping over his pants as she leaves the room.
Snake: No.
Panel 6 � Danny looking at his pants all the way across the room.
Danny: Well, this just�/ sucks.
Page 16 20050725
Panel 1 � Danny struggling to get his jacket from the other side of the bed.
Danny: Almost got it.
Panel 2 � Danny pulling out his cell phone from his jacket pocket.
Danny: There we go.
Panel 3 Brad and Rebecca in the movie threater.
SFX: BZZZ
Rebecca: Daddy, your phone �
Brad: Rebecca, shh.
Panel 4 � Danny on his phone.
Danny: Oh right they�re at the movies.
Phone: Hello?
Danny: ALLY! I need your help!
Panel 5 � Ally with her foot on a demons head and dodging a flying bottle.
Ally: Kinda busy.
Danny: But it�s an emergency.
Panel 6 � Danny confused while talking on the phone.
Phone: Are you dead or dying?
Danny: Um� No.
Phone: Then bye.
Panel 7 � Danny pouting.
Danny: Good to know she cares.
Page 17 20050727
Panel 1 � Phone ringing.
SFX: BRRRIINNNG
Panel 2 � Phone ringing in the foreground and Pat opening one eye in the background.
SFX: BRRRRIIIIINNNG
Pat: Ugh.
Panel 3 � Phone flying across the room and hitting the wall.
SFX: THWAACK THADUMP Thwipt krussish
Panel 4 � Phone on the ground as Pat rolls back over to go to sleep.
Panel 5 � Danny looking at his phone with a furrow brow.
Danny (thought): DAMMIT PAT. / Guess I�m going to have to call Seth./ But I don�t know his number.
Page 18 20050729
Panel 1 � A goth club.
Caption: Meanwhile.
Seth: So you like vampires?
Panel 2 � Goth girl in slutty clothes with Seth sitting at a table with her.
Goth girl: Oh yeah, they�re so hot.
Panel 3 � Seth leaning into her and his smile reveals some sinister fangs.
Seth: Oh really? / Well, then I have a surprise for you.
Panel 4 � Seth about to bite her neck.
Danny (pyshic): SETH!
Panel 5 � Seth pulling away with an annoyed look.
Goth girl: Something wrong?
Seth: No
Panel 6 � Seth standing up.
Seth : I just need to go kill someone.
Danny (psychic): Wicked! It worked!
Page 19 20050801
Panel 1 � Seth stepping out of the goth club.
Danny: You know I was a bit weirded out when you said you could hear my thoughts no matter wha-
Seth: Danny, get to the point!
Panel 2 � Seth walking pass people waiting to get into the club.
Danny: Right. See I um� need your help.
Seth: Get Brad.
Panel 3 � Seth aproching a cross walk where a middle aged man stands.
Danny: Already tried him, and Ally AND Pat.
Seth: So I�m your last resort.
Panel 4 � Seth snarling.
Seth: I�m touched. / What happened?
Panel 5 � Seth standing at the cross walk.
Danny: A fit bird invited me to her hotel room, chained me to the bed, and then robbed me.
Page 20 20050803
Panel 1 � Seth talking as the business man glances up at him.
Seth: And you didn�t use a spell to escape because�
Panel 2 � down show of seth and business man waiting at the cross walk.
Danny: My spells are in my pants which are on the other side of the room.
Panel 3 � The man giving seth a worried expression as seth talks.
Danny: The hotel�s �
Seth: I know where you are.
Panel 4 � man looking at the street sign that still saying don�t walk
Seth: I told you, the blood bond I created between us lets me sense where you are.
Panel 5 � Seth noticing the man giving him a weird look.
Seth: What?
Man: Uh nothing.
Panel 6 � man presses the crosswalk button repeatedly as seth rolls his eyes.
Seth: Danny, you owe me a bottle of Johnnie Walker Black after this.
Man: Come on. Come on.
Page 21 20050805
Panel 1 � Seth outside the hotel door.
Seth: Alright, I got the key from the front desk.
Danny: WAIT! Don�t come in-
Panel 2 � Seth standing there and through the open door Danny is sitting on the bed with an obvious boner.
Danny: � yet.
Panel 3 � Seth running his fingers through his hair.
Seth: Now if you get so excited with me just walking in the room / I think all your comments about me being gay might be misdirected.
Panel 4 � Danny glaring at him as seth stands there with his hands in his pockets.
Danny: Oh shut up! / She was a very fit bird and it has a mind of its own, okay?
Panel 5 - Seth picking at his finger nails.
Seth: Obviously, listening to that mind got you into this mess.
Panel 6 � Danny glaring at him.
Danny: Are you going to help or not, you berk?
Seth: I will once you calm down.
Page 22 20050808
Panel 1 � Danny scratching his head.
Danny: Okay, think about something not sexy.
Panel 2 danny cringding.
Danny: Hmm�/ Rugby. / Dead puppies. / My ex-wife.
Panel 3 � Seth yawning and danny makes an O_O face.
Seth: How about that vampire in drag that almost raped you?
Panel 4 � Danny yelling at Seth who looks uninterested.
Danny: You BLOODY bastard! I was trying to repress that!
Panel 5 � Seth pointing downward.
Danny: WHY would you bring that up?! WHY?!
Seth: Look down.
Panel 6 � Danny noticing he no longer has a boner Seth breaks the chain between each part of the handcuffs.
Danny: Oh. / Well, that did the trick.
Seth: Now hold still.
Page 23 20050810
Panel 1 � Seth sitting on the edge of the bed while Danny puts his pants on.
Seth: So she hit on you first? / That wasn�t suspicious to you?
Panel 2 � Danny getting his shirt on.
Danny: No, should it?
Seth: Think about all the girls who have made the first move on you.
Panel 3 � Danny thinking.
Danny: There were those mercenary girls who were hired to capture me, / that vampire who knocked me out, /
Panel 4 � Seth lying on the bed.
Danny: And now this bird who robbed me.
Seth: Seeing a pattern?
Panel 5 � Danny getting his coat on.
Danny: Hmm./ Evil girls are hot.
Panel 6 � Danny adjusting his jacket as Seth sits up.
Seth: Uh huh. / So are you sure you don�t want me to break the rest of the handcuff?
Page 24 20050812
Panel 1 � Danny opening the hotel door and glaring at Seth.
Danny: Positive./ You�d probably think it�d be funny to break my wrist in the process.
Panel 2 � Seth walking out the door behind him as Danny lights a cigarette.
Seth: Fine. As long as I get my scotch,
Danny: Uh yeah� About that.
Panel 3 - Danny scratching his head as Seth glares are him.
Danny: See, she took my wallet, so you�re going to have to wait.
Panel 4 � Seth towering over Danny.
Danny: heh heh . / Please don�t hurt me.
Panel 5 � Seth pulling Danny by his hair.
Danny: Ow. Ow. Ow./ Where are we going?/ Ow.
Seth: To get your wallet. / I want my scotch.
Page 25 20050815
Panel 1 � Danny and Seth in the stairwell that leads to Ally�s bar.
Seth: Then she gave me the money back.
Danny: That�s bullshit. A prostitute wouldn�t do that.
Panel 2 = Seth pushing open the door.
Seth: No, it�s true. I�m THAT good.
Panel 3 � Danny walking behind Seth toward the bar.
Danny: No way.
Seth: Believe what you want. It�s true.
Panel 4 � Kim behind the bar sees and gives a sly smile.
Kim: Hi Seth./ You want a glass of scotch, right?
Panel 5 � Seth flirting with Kim.
Seth: Sadly, Kim, I can�t be graced with your presence.
Panel 6 � Seth gesturing to Danny.
Seth: My blood bond here got his wallet stolen by a snake demon. / Have you seen her?
Wolf Demon: Heh heh.
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Panel 1 � Seth and danny turning their attention to a buzzed wolf demon.
Wolf demon: You�re one of the morons who fell for her con. / You loser.
Panel 2 � Seth looks bored as Danny leans across he bar.
Danny: Hey, how about instead of laughing, you help us find her?
Panel 3 � Wolf demon sipping his drink.
Wolf demon: Maybe if I saw some cash, I�d be more inclined to help.
Panel 4 � Danny biting his lower lip and turned to seth who is reaching into his coat.
Danny: uh Seth since she nicked my wallet, could you maybe handle this?
Seth: Fine.
Panel 5 � Club�s stairwell.
SFX: GAAHHHH
Panel 6 � danny and Seth walking out.
Danny: I meant bribe the guy, not stab him.
Seth: He told us what we need to know, didn�t he?
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Panel 1 � danny and Seth walking down the street. Seth lips his bloody knife like a lollipop.
Danny: Seth, you�re one sick bloke.
Seth: Funny. / You�re not the first to tell me that.
Panel 2 � Danny looking at Seth.
Danny: I�m serious. First, I thought it was a vampire thing.
Panel 3 � danny points at seth who is sucking on his knife.
Danny: But Pat doesn�t act this way. / So it�s just you. / YOU are completely mad.
Panel 4 � Seth puts his knife away unphased by what Danny has said.
Seth: Well, Pat doesn�t act this way because he still tries to be human.
Panel 5 - Seth talking.
Seth: It�s why he�s so unhappy. / He doesn�t realize his true power.
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Panel 1 � Seth grabbing Danny�s collar and pulling him right to his face.
Seth: Like did you know, / I could rip your heart from your chest.
Panel 2 � Seth making a very sinister face.
Seth: Before you even had time to scream.
Panel 3 � Seth�s face even closer to Danny�s
Seth: And all those comments you�ve made suggesting I�m gay?
Panel 4 � Seth holding Danny�s chin.
Seth: I could make those jokes your desires/ and make you beg me to explore every inch of your flesh.
Panel 5 � seth dropping danny who is pretrified.
Seth: Oh hey! / it�s your car. We must be in the right place.
Panel 6 � Danny standing there still terrified.
Seth ( off panel): Danny, stop pissing yourself and hurry up.
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Panel 1 � Danny chasing after Seth.
Danny: Seth? SETH! Wait up!.
Panel 2 � Seth glancing backward as a nervous Danny walks up to him.
Danny: You� you were just joking about that right?
Seth: About what?
Panel 3 � Danny still worried looking up at Seth who is smirking.
Danny: About how you could make me fancy you. / You can�t really do that, um�/ Can you?
Panel 4 - Danny gets wide eyed with panic and seth smirks.
Seth: Oh, of course I can.
Panel 5 � Seth rubbing danny�s head in a very patronizing manner.
Seth: Oh but don�t worry. / If I wanted you as a love slave, I would have done it already.
Danny: I REALLY hate you.
Panel 6 � Seth looking around as Danny points.
Seth: I know./ Now where this snake chick?
Danny: By the bar.
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Panel 1 � Seth sitting next to the snake lady.
Seth: Excuse me, miss.
Snake Lady: Sorry, not interested in vampires.
Panel 2 � Seth standing to block her from leaving.
Seth: This will only take a moment.
Snake lady: Okay�
Panel 3 � Seth gesturing as he leans toward her.
Seth: Do you know what a blood bond is?
Snake lady: Um � that�s when�
Panel 4 � Seth glently pulling Danny�s wallet out of her pocket, while she looks at him.
Snake Lady: A vampire gives a human some of their blood,
Panel 5 � Seth moving the wallet behind his back.
Snake Lady: But not enough to turn them into a vampire.
Panel 6 � Seth pretending to listen.
Snake Lady- and then the human doesn�t age until the vampire dies.
Seth: Correct.
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Panel 1 � Seth leaning in closer.
Seth: Now the reason I�m here is because you took MY blood bond�s wallet.
Panel 2 � Snake lady getting defensive.
Snake lady: Prove it.
Panel 3 � Seth presenting the wallet.
Seth: Well, his wallet was in your pocket.
Panel 4 � the arm still behind his back has black magic circling around it.
Snake Lady: And what exactly are you going to do about it?
Panel 5 � Seth grinning as his eyes turn black and the black magic circles most of his body now.
Seth: I thought you�d never ask.
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Splash page seth blowing snake lady up.
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Panel 1 � Seth standing over the skeleton.
Panel 2 � Seth picks up the skull.
Panel 3 Seth walking up to Danny with the skull in hand.
Seth: Here�s your stuff. / And look, I get a souvenir.
Danny: That�s gross.
Panel 4 � Seth holding the bloody skull right up to Danny�s face.
Seth: Oh come on. You don�t think she�s pretty anymore?
Danny: Aw nasty! Get that away from me!
Panel 5 � Seth playing with the skull.
Seth: heh, just give her a little kiss. Heh heh.
Danny: You�re completely disgusting.
Update as a note to myself and for the curious
Okay, so this is what my work load and goals are looking like and what I have/haven’t finished since switching to once a week updates.
Finish Character Designs for Kids bookFinish roughs for Kids bookFinish Final Line Art for Kids bookDesign websiteWrite first draft of kickstarter infoFaM cover